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 //BB adds:// Switching from Financial Institutions to States is a change in meaning to some extent, and some of the original signers could possibly not approve. Perhaps the footnotes could be shortened, but probably not eliminated. //BB adds:// Switching from Financial Institutions to States is a change in meaning to some extent, and some of the original signers could possibly not approve. Perhaps the footnotes could be shortened, but probably not eliminated.
  
-RC: I tend to agree with BB, although “states obliging financial institutions” clarifies who is the driver behind the IFIs, which won’t likely do anything without pressure from member states. So I think both are friendly to the original; to some extent states obliging IFIs is clearer. ​ But I like both. On this one I felt the word “peace” that is dropped in the update is incorporated within the SDGs and therefore not lost. +RC: I tend to agree with BB, although “states obliging financial institutions” clarifies who is the driver behind the IFIs, which won’t likely do anything without pressure from member states. So I think both are friendly to the original; to some extent states obliging IFIs is clearer. ​ But I like both. On this one I felt the word “peace” that is dropped in the update is incorporated within the SDGs and therefore not lost, specifically goal 16: http://​www.un.org/​development/​desa/​disabilities/​envision2030-goal16.html
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