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 21. All states shall support SDGs, tax wealth and financial transactions,​ redistributing funds as basic income. ​ 21. All states shall support SDGs, tax wealth and financial transactions,​ redistributing funds as basic income. ​
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 +21. States shall oblige international financial organizations to reinforce SDGs, decarbonization and measurable wealth redistribution.
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 +//BB adds:// Switching from Financial Institutions to States is a change in meaning to some extent, and some of the original signers could possibly not approve. Perhaps the footnotes could be shortened, but probably not eliminated.
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 +RC: I tend to agree with BB, although “states obliging financial institutions” clarifies who is the driver behind the IFIs, which won’t likely do anything without pressure from member states. So I think both are friendly to the original; to some extent states obliging IFIs is clearer. ​ But I like both. On this one I felt the word “peace” that is dropped in the update is incorporated within the SDGs and therefore not lost, specifically goal 16: http://​www.un.org/​development/​desa/​disabilities/​envision2030-goal16.html. ​
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